Monday, December 3, 2018

last kiss literary essay

7 comments:

  1. I like how you stated your claim many times in the story

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  2. I loved how you used similes in your intro. It was a great literary essay:)

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  3. I liked how you compared Ralph Fletcher to our world. I think that you should not have to say "Page 1", "Page 2" and stuff like that. Otherwise Good Job!

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  4. I like how you described that life is like a roller coaster. Great hook and story good job. :)

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  5. great job you had soo much expretion 😁

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