I like how you stated your claim many times in the story
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I loved how you used similes in your intro. It was a great literary essay:)
Bravo! I love your intro.
I liked how you compared Ralph Fletcher to our world. I think that you should not have to say "Page 1", "Page 2" and stuff like that. Otherwise Good Job!
I like how you described that life is like a roller coaster. Great hook and story good job. :)
great job you had soo much expretion 😁
I like how you stated your claim many times in the story
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DeleteI loved how you used similes in your intro. It was a great literary essay:)
ReplyDeleteBravo! I love your intro.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you compared Ralph Fletcher to our world. I think that you should not have to say "Page 1", "Page 2" and stuff like that. Otherwise Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you described that life is like a roller coaster. Great hook and story good job. :)
ReplyDeletegreat job you had soo much expretion 😁
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